The large cool store selling cheap clothes
Set out in simple sizes plainly(Knitwear, Summer Casuals, Hose,
In browns and greys, maroon and navy)
Conjures the weekday world of those
Who leave at dawn low terraced houses
Timed for factory, yard and site.
But past the heaps of shirts and trousers
Spread the stands of Modes For Night:
Machine-embroidered, thin as blouses,
Lemon, sapphire, moss-green, rose
Bri-Nylon Baby Dolls and Shorties
Flounce in clusters. To suppose
They share that world, to think their sort is
Matched by something in it, shows
How separate and unearthly love is,
Or women are, or what they do,
Or in our young unreal wishes
Seem to be: synthetic, new,
And natureless in ecstasies.
How does
Larkin explore the ideas of inequality between social classes?
Phillip Larkin wrote the poem 'The
Large Cool' store in the 1950s, this poem is a description of Marks
and Spencer’s shops at the time. In the
1950s, M&S was a shop similar to Primark that sold cheap, slightly dated
but fashionable clothes. Throughout this poem Larkin explores the idea of inequality between the social classes by showing that the working class have a false conciousness.
The word
‘cool’ used in the title of this poem could have two meanings. The first of
these is that ‘cool’ means fashionable and that the clothes this shop is
selling will make the people buying them fashionable, when the reality is that
these clothes only create a false consciousness and do not gain the working
class power. Marxist critics would be cynical about the fashion zeitgeist of the 1950s as they would believe that if people were too obsessed with the idea of fashion and spent their time trying to gain power through materialistic things then they wouldn't see the issues with the class system. The hierarchy of the class system is believed by marxist critics to be a big problem within society. Marxist critics aim for the class system to be abolished and they feel that by society being materialistic this can't happen. Larkin used the word 'cool' ironically to show that by buying these clothes it wouldn't make the purchaser cool but instead they would just be buying into to the ideologies of the materialistic society and creating a false consciousnesses that they had power, despite being of a lower class. The other is that ‘cool’
means cold which has connotations meaning that the store is heartless cynical
and an unpleasant place for the people who shop there. This represents the
wider society, showing that the society in the 1950s was a capitalist society
where the bourgeoisie continued to get rich whilst the proletariat worked hard
to give their money away for materialistic objects. Marxist critics believe that all decades were capitalist and would therefore feel that this line only proves their argument. The word ‘cool’ emphasises
that Larkin believed that society at the time was a consumerist society in
which people bought things with the belief that it would gain them power, but instead
they continued to increase their inferiority to the bourgeoisie by losing money
that is then given to the upper class who control all means of production.
The language
used is ‘The large cool store’ is simplistic with mainly monosyllabic words
used to reflect the look and the feel of department stores.This could also be done to reflect that the working class are 'simple' as they wouldn't have had access to education due to their class. This is an example of alienation and shows that it doesn't matter what material things they own, they can never gain power because their social class prevented them from accessing services such as education that the upper classes had access to.
Larkin uses the contrast in colours between the ‘brown and greys’ of weekday clothes and the more glamorous ‘lemon, sapphire, moss green’ of the nightwear to highlight that society is materialistic and superficial and that advertising create the false consciousness that people can escape their mundane lives. These unreal wishes are created because of the commodification of these clothes from the proletariats which makes them feel more powerful. The bourgeoisie sells these clothes to the proletariat to make them believe they are gaining power, however they are just increasing the power of the bourgeoisie by giving them money.
Larkin uses the contrast in colours between the ‘brown and greys’ of weekday clothes and the more glamorous ‘lemon, sapphire, moss green’ of the nightwear to highlight that society is materialistic and superficial and that advertising create the false consciousness that people can escape their mundane lives. These unreal wishes are created because of the commodification of these clothes from the proletariats which makes them feel more powerful. The bourgeoisie sells these clothes to the proletariat to make them believe they are gaining power, however they are just increasing the power of the bourgeoisie by giving them money.
Furthermore,
in his description of these clothes, he describes the women’s clothes in much
more detail than the men’s, describing their nightwear as ‘Machine-embroidered,
thin as blouses’ which could imply that Larkin thinks that women have no depth
to them and sees them also as, ‘thin’. This introduces another critical
interpretation from a feminist angle; feminist critics would view this as a way
to show a patriarchal society in which women are inferior to men and are marginalised
from society because of their gender.
The working
class are shown as being alienated and marginalised by society in this poem,
the line ‘Timed for factory, yard and site’ tells the reader that the people
who shop in this store are the working class as they work in factories where
they have to do hard labour in order to make money to survive. Due to the
social class of these people, they aren’t educated meaning that they can’t get
a well-paid job; this is what keep them alienated from the upper class. The
alienation of this class from society means that they are powerless and are
controlled by the bourgeoisies as they control the means of production. Larkin
shows how mundane the lives of the working class in the structure of his poem.
By using an ABABA rhyme scheme, the reader understands more about the lives of
the working class as it represents the simplicity and repetitiveness of their
work. This shows marginalisation as the
people who are doing all the work will never lead similar lives to the
bourgeoisie and the work makes them feel unimportant as they never receive the
rewards. When reading this poem, Andrew Motion asked the question ‘the argument is whether the shoppers are deluding themselves
when they buy something … or are they going beyond the limits which society
sets for them?’. This comment highlights the false consciousness created by
the upper class so that the proletariats feel as if they are gaining power,
which Motion describes as delusional. In addition, it represents materialistic
determinism whereby society views people as having more power or being more
important based on what they own or wear, an example of consumerism. The
feelings of feeling included within the same society as the upper class only
alienates the working class further but also from themselves.
Another use of structure to show how mundane and drab the lives of the working class are is the use of emjambment between stanzas in this poem. Larkin uses emjambment to make the rythym of the poem slow and dreary, showing the reader that this is how the lives of the proletariats are. This is a contrast to the more exciting lives of the bourgeoise, another way in which Larkin explores the inequality between the class system of the 1950s. This would have been viewed by the marxist critics as a representation of the treatment of the different classes.
To
summarise, this poem comments on the illusion that the working class have, that
they think they are a better person if the dress better like the bourgeoisie,
creating a materialistic class system. Larkin shows within this poem the
treatment of the lower class and mocks the live they lead to highlight the inequality
between the social classes.
Monica
ReplyDeleteYou show some awareness of marxist views and attempt to analyse most sections through the critical lense of marxism but often your points fail to go into the required depth. There are moments of great insight and inference in p3 but there are also sections which are underdeveloped.
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You will need to include contextual information about Larkin, what influenced his work, how did he write, how is he regarded? You also need to be more specific about the society in which he lived. Marxists believe all history is the history of class struggle, this class structure is created by capitalism. Saying the 1950s was capitalist is pointless, all decades are capitalist. Now is capitalist. You need to identify social tensions at the time and link these to marxism.
Your subsequent point about 'cool' is actually really interesting and insightful and demonstrates your potential but we must work towards ensuring that you always write to this standard. Try to extend this point by exploring what is meant by 'zeitgeist' and consider why marxists would be cynical about 'cool'. This should also help you evaluate a marxist reading of his description of the female clothers.
Try and also consider alternative reasons for the monosylabic and simplistic structure of the work.